Category: Writers Block
Why do we lock our hearts
And not let anyone in
Why do we refuse to feel what we feel
When it doesn’t feel right
Why do we build homes in our hearts
That fall apart, yet we still live in them
Why do we cling to the last vestages
Of a life we once loved
And never really see the life we live now
Why do we deny the ones who love us
simply because we fear we can’t be loved
Why do we love blindly
And yet expect to see what it is we love
Why do we lock the door to our hearts
Yet look to see who it is that is knocking
Why do we love
And yet fear to love at all
This is a nice piece. It's very thought-provoking. And I also take a liking to the assonance in the piece.
but it doesn't rhyme raven; and your such a fan of rhyme schemes.
Lol, thanks.
I love it! They don't have to rhyme to be good. and this is!
Thanks, and the rhyming thing was just to tease raven.
Cody, that almost made me cry. LOL
This is good. I'd change the title to something a little more thoughtful? This piece seemed to have a falling quality, like all the linew were rushing, rushing to a common end. It's a common style, but an affective one. Well penned.
Cody, it's a nice piece. I'd like to hear more of them in the future.